Apocalypse protection team

Description from original post (created 2012-05-23 11:42):

This is for the Apocalypse skin contest!

please give feedback and diamond and all that other stuff tht makes me happy

feedback is really important whether its about the backstory or about a major flaw in my skin. Also contest judges if you are looking at this please give me advise on how i would score more in this contest. next time.

Backstory



In England evil creatures stured in the silence and shadows, they called deserted shacks and shed there home. they waited many years hoping to regain there strength but when this did happen the humans that shared there world fought back to repel these vile vermin, this is when the war began! at first the "mobs" as they were called now took over many towns villages and homes. The Creepers (the strongest of the mobs) didnt like these human made buildings and started to destroy people old homes and communities.

But one day somethink happend in the humans intrest, they retook a small town called planetcraft (named after the best website of all time and the best game of all time) it was at this time they saw how the creepers had vilated the place they once called home. This Encuraged young people to sign up for the PMC force. One man to step up to the plate was a young, small, weak man called freddy jones. He came from a small poor family, his dad was a worker at the old mineshaft and his mother looked after his four smaller brothers, Liam, Paul, Gary and william.

Freddy was out on a patrol of the newly claimed territory when a massive creeper with a blue phasey substance around him. It was the king creeper, the leader of the evil. freddy, who was holding a small pistol shot five rounds into him but immidiatly reflected of the mysterious blue thing that surrounded him. The creeper charged at him repeateing his war cry "Sssss". Freddy jumped dropping his gun to the ground. "No!" he shouted. The King towerd over him slowly saying "Ssss" as if to taunt him before his death. freddy draw his long knife from a strap around his leg and pushed his gloved hand through the blueness and stabed him in his green, mutated leg. Suddenly there was a massive BOOM! he looked up to see small green particles fill the air filling it with a sense of victory. A small peice of gunpowder layed on the floor at where the king once stood. It didnt take Freddy long to take it back to the king of the humans and be announced the leader of the Apocalypse protection team. Only one target was set for his future.. To... Win the contest!!!!!!

The once feard creepers were mostly destroyed but from this event rised a new popularity and love for these evil animals consiquently many minecrafters have creeper hoodies and masks. But i wonder how much they will love the animals when the Endermen find there place in the a war...

the story is yours finish the story of freddy by downloading this skin and implementing it in your own gameplay. Good Luck!

Thank you this is my first contest skin it would meen a lot to be in the first 100 and even more to be 1st 2nd or 3rd!

all other entrances Good luck!