CyBURG The Cathem

Description from original post (created 2012-11-12 14:18):

Hey Oxes, Neox here with my first REAL SHADE (Tell me what y'all think bout it)

The Story:
It all happened that night on the farm, the Missus making dinner, the young son playing with the dog and then Father
the biggest of them all, was fidgeting with his metal and bars again. Nobody knew why he done it but himself and that's the way he'd like to keep it. He had a shed all to himself, he was know'n as an inventor, but did't invent anything. He was working on something big, all could tell but not know what.

As for me I was sitting in my bedroom
looking out the window examining every move until "Yes!" He yelled like never before, I grabbed my binoculars and checked out what he was so exited for. Then i seen it, a big tin of metal, man like and erie. I shoved on my coat and
crept down stairs, out the door and hid behind the barn, peeking through a hole in the wall i settled watching him like a hawk. "This is it, this is the future!" He said happily to himself, I too was amazed with it. Nor of us knew what it done, all it was was a lifeless piece of tin (So if he is calling the future pieces of tin i think he's gone mad!) All i know is the object meant very much to him, He picked up this strange red glowing tube and opened up the tin man, and inserted it into a slot in the middle and then rolled over the roof glin and raised the tin man with a clever contraption to the top of the barn. I noticed a kite tied to the tin man, just then a lightning struck the kite that lead to the tin, the tin jumped and jizze'ld untill Father released the rope and the contraption came down with the tin on it. The eyes flicker'd open and then the tin sat up. Father gasped "It worked" He said a number of times to himself, I also was taken by this tin that sat up and stared him in the eye. "Its okay son i see you come on out" He said to me, I slowly walked to him, being cautious about all the stuff on the path to him. "What is it dad?" I whispered to him, "Burgesty"
he said. Mum called for dinner and was making her way over, "We have to hide it!" i said "Agreed" said dad in a rush while he shoved some metal over the Man "We can do no better" he said walking ahead to home.

I headed off to bed after dinner for a good nights sleep, all i could dream and think of was that tin. I woke uo the next day wondering was it a dream, was it real? I did not know. I headed down to the kitchen table where brother and mother were eating "Dad here?" i asked "No he must be fidgeting again" said mother. I excuse'd myself from the table and rushed out the door, When i made it to the barn it was still locked so i crawl'd up the ladder that lead to the roof and slipped through a hole in the corner, I made my way back downstairs of the barn to find a note lying on the bench it said "Dear son you may be wondering where i may be, well thats a hard question i have written this note before i have made my choice. I have sacrificed myself for Burgesty, it is up and running now, i have implanted parts of my brain into it and also my blood, If you hit the remote you shall find him it will make a siren noise. I love you son - Father

My heart broke in half, my father killed himself for a robot how stupid! He did not have to do this to us!
I grabbed the remote at hit a button in a second i had a tin standing in front of me, I looked it in the eye and shouted "You caused my father to kill himself!" Just after its hand reached out for mine and then i realized i didn't lose my dad he was right here...

Thanks for reading guys rate and comment for more skins and possibly stories :D
I would love to be a finalist

Neox Out!