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(created 2012-03-21 16:18):
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Micheal:He is an okay detective and some say that he is immature. He thinks that he is handsome, smart, and good at puzzles. He doesn't care what people think of him, no one will know his darkest secret as long as he can't die. Michael Smart doesn't know one thing, he's not human. His father invented him after his future mother died, Julian Smart wanted a son but his wife died of an unknown disease that Mike would of had at birth. Mike was made at age eight and still never found out about his life...
Metal Man:
He's reliable and doesn't let anyone down, except Kendra Alaska, his elementary school crush. He protects the city and doesn't let anything stand in his way, even Charlie Benedict, his ex-best friend who took advantage of his powers and used them for bad, he fights after taking Mike to a lab to take his powers away and transport them into him after Mike got into a car crash because he was feeling dizzy.
Story Part- Age 8:
I punched him across the ally, he hit my dad. Next thing I knew, I was being dragged by my messy black hair. I felt like screaming but instead I cried to myself. I started to run and I heard metal crashing as I ran, but then I tripped and it sounded like a building fell. I looked at my scrapped hands, metal. But then I saw Kendra Alaska, and she screamed.
Story Part- Age 37:
I spun the car back in control.
"Let me out now, pull over," Charlie said.
"I'm not pulling over on the highway," I said it firmly but didn't mean it, it's concerted kidnap if I didn't let him out. "You don't even have a car!"
Charlie got out when I pulled over and started walking. I started to get a headache and next thing I knew, all was black.