The Girl Without a Heart

Description from original post (created 2013-12-12 16:36):

Storytime, children.Ok so once there was this girl who had a crush on some random dude she met. She talked with him every now and then, but she was way too shy to say much and she never told anyone about it But he fell in love with someone else and he got married and lived happily ever after, or whatever. So then her heart exploded and she spent the rest of her days sitting around stupidly and dejectedly, which was really idiotic of her because he was extremely annoying anyway.
True story.

Feedback please, on the skin of course, because the story sucks.

CTS_Chris continues the story here with a skin of his own: The Man With No Heart