Description from original post (created 2014-03-16 19:19):
BACKSTORY:
"Where are we goin captin? We ain't got nough food to survive off of."
"I'll think of somthin alrighty." Replied Captain Buck. Captain Buck is the captain of the ship Assassin Age. He has a bounty on his head for a million dollars. "Aye, whats that ahead mate?" Said the cabin boy. "I don't know. AYEEEE ONE U GET OVA HERE NOW! WE FOUND AN ISLAND!" Captain Buck made 3 of the sailors on his ship come towards him. He told them that land was near.
"Welp, we hit the land mates!" Said Captain.
"Heya, you must be a captain." A voice said.
"Well yeah, I am kiddo. Where am I?" Replied Buck.
"Ur on the island Honorcry." Replied the voice.
"Who are you?" Buck said nervously.
"I'm Luigi and I've come for your ship!" Luigi said, running towards Buck. Luigi knocked out Buck's entire crew, and even Buck himself. Luigi then stole the ship an sailed for Hoddy Town.
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Facts:
Buck likes people
Buck hates fruit
Buck doens't know english very well, he is Finnish.