Dead Pirate Skeleton

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Here is my entry for the contest, guys! Hope you like it!


Story

Captain Gutenburg was one of the most deadliest, fearsome, richest, pirate on the seas. One day, while Captain Gutenburg and his crew were sailing in the seven seas, a random ship came up behind them and shot the back of Gutenburg's ship with a cannon! Gutenburged slowed the boat down to go on board and fight on the other ship. When the other ship catched up to Gutenburg's ship, they let out a plank to walk to the ship and attack! Gutenburg, as their captain, went first to attack, they fought and fought until one of the archers on the other ship, shot Gutenburg in the left eye with a ruby tip arrow. Gutenburg screamed in pain but continued fighting until he couldn't take the pain anymore, so he dropped his sword and the other pirates kicked him in the chest so hard, that it slighty broke his ribcage. Gutenburg fell down and 2 of the medics on his ship carried him to the back of the ship and tried to heal him, they looked for the chest containing the golden apples, but to see that the hole at the back of the ship was where the golden apples where. The medics looked back and saw the chest floating out to sea, they knew they are doomed without Gutenburg. after some minutes they saw that it had turned night and Gutenburg's crew was losing to the other pirates. The captain of the other ship yelled to his crew to come back on board to not get blown up by the cannons they where about to shoot. The whole crew did as commanded and got back on board to their ship, They shot cannons to Gutenburg's ship and blew it up. Gutenburg went flying in the sky on 2 blocks of wooden planks and landing in the sea, Gutenburg got back up again to see his ship burning up in the hot flaming flames. Days passed and Gutenburg was sailing in the sea on wooden planks. After a month he washed up on shore where some of the survivors from the attack were. They saw their old captain who was nothing but  a pile of bones, seaweed, his obsidian hat, diamond belt, and a chest inside his chest...


thanks guys guys for helping me make it to the finalist! Even though I didn't win, out of nearly 1000 people/entries, mine was in 70th place! Thanks guys, it really means a lot to me that you guys like what I make :) 

- Fer