M.E.R.P. Ondine the ocean elf!

Description from original post (created 2014-03-15 20:50):

This is Ondine, she is an ocean elf! One day whilst she was playing with her fellow ocean elves a huge shadow appeared in the water! Ondine's friends where terrified and swam away as fast as possible, creating beautiful streams of light behind them in the water as they swam back to their palace home: Indra. Everyone was treated equally there. Ondine was frozen with fright! 
" What is that giant thing in the water??? how did it find this place!?" Ondine wondered in her head she was so scared she couldn't even speak! All of a sudden Ondine thought of something. 
" What if it's friendly?" Ondine calmed down enough to swim a little closer to the giant thing in the water, then closer, then finally so close that she could touch it. It was rough, hard, and unpleasant to touch. Ondine slowly started to swim up to the surface to see what it looked like up there, and to see if she could find the face of the giant creature.  As Ondine got closer to the surface of the water she could hear faint noises growing louder and louder! Ondine poked her head above the water. She gasped! The creature was covered in hundreds of smaller ones, And the smaller ones looked just like Ondine! Only, they didn't have pointy ears, and they were all men. They didn't look very friendly. One nice looking boy went over to the egde of the giant creature. He saw Ondine.
" MAN OVERBOARD! MAN OVERBOARD!" he yelled out. Ondine was confused, she didn't understand what that meant. The men lowered something down into the water.
" Grab on we'll pull you up!" shouted the boy from earlier. Ondine swam over to it, she grabbed on to it, the men pulled her on to the large creature. It smelled bad up there. 
" Now how does a pretty young lady like yourself end up in the middle of no where?!" asked the young boy. There was a murmur among the crew of men.
" Look at how she's dressed! You would think she's a royal!" one of the men cried.
" And just look at that hair! It's as green as sea foam!" another shouted. 
" Whot 'bout those ears? They're all pointy!" a third man yelled.
" Whot a pretty crown!" a 4th yelled.
"Guys! let her talk!" the young boy shouted over the ruckus. " Go on, it's alright." he said to Ondine. Ondine replied with 
" I live in the sea. this is my natural hair colour, where I come from these clothes are normal to be seen in, and elves ears are normally pointy!" the men all gasped at her answer.
" You must have been in the water to long! Elves don't exist! they are nothing but myths!, And it's impossible to live in the water unless you're a fish!" one of the bigger men shouted at Ondine. Ondine got annoyed at that remark. her face started turning an ever so little blue, like it always did when she got annoyed.
" Guys, look! She's turnin blue! Quick someone get me a blanket!" the young boy yelled at the group. Juts then the water started shining all around them. 
" My family is here!" Ondine exclaimed. She went over to the side of the big creature and waved at the water down below. The young boy holding her hand and looking down at the water with her. One of Ondine's friends popped their heads above the surface of the water and waved back. The young boy gasped, as the two yelled a quick conversation to each other in a strange language. 
" You should come live with us!" Ondine then said to the boy.
" Wh-WHAT?! NO WAY WOULD I LIVE WITH YOU GUYS, YOU GUYS ARE CRAZY!!!!" the boy shouted at Ondine. This made Ondine mad, her face turned bright blue. She had liked the boy, she thought they could be great friends! She yelled something at her friend in the water again. Her friend then yelled something back to her, then to the intire group. Ondine jumped into the water. SPLASH!!!! Then the giant creature started to tip. The men on top started screaming and panicking. The giant creature tipped over. SPLLLLLLAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The creature hit the water! only a few men survived that wreckage. From then on, women were considered bad luck to take sailing. THE END!

- Yellow