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Robert Edward Derrickson
A fine young man who lived in the ninetieth century. Robert lived in a small town called Steamos. He was born in 1868 during the Pre-electric time. Robert lived with his father who was an engineer, miner, and craftier. Robert learned all these skills as well from his father. in 1878 Robert's father died along with his mother because of an explosive experiment. Robert was forced to move in with the richest man in town, his uncle. Robert's uncle is rich because of all his work, and successful experiments. Robert's uncle's name was Dr. James Walters, he taught Robert how to craft fine tools, and successful potions. Later on in 1888 Robert was twenty years old and moved out. He learned everything that his uncle knew. Robert worked hard on every single kind of material and what he can craft out of them. One day Robert got his daily newspaper and read that a man went through an experiment and blew his eyes off. Robert decided to get to work and create something for protection of the eyes. It took months for Robert to create his new invention, but one day he figured it out. he used Gold ingots, Leather, glass, and a dye of any color. He sold goggles and made tons of money. Robert noticed that with his funds he can craft more inventions. days later he created a clockwork, weeks later he created weaponry, months later he created mechanical items, years later he created a plane. Before he knew it he was a multimillionaire. 7 years later Robert was thirty-two years old. He went on a long mining trip and found one rare element. This strange element became diamonds. The finest metal in the land. Robert made billions of dollars from this. Robert died at age Thirty-five in the middle of a mining trip, he was killed by a monster. you can here his last moments in the eleventh recording he has made.

Robert E. Walters 1868-1903

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