Zhook

Description from original post (created 2011-10-20 04:20):

This is a skin i made for the halloween contest.
Any critisism is welcome
i wrote a rather long background story to him, as he has a long and tragic past, feel free to read and comment as it is the first story i have ever wrote :D

Zhook, once a noble knight of his village, is now unrecognizable from the vermin he once fought against.
Itn all started one day within his nvillage, when a new type of monster nappeared, a small creature, with humped backs and blue skin. the nvillagers fought against it with all of their might, but nothing seemed nto be able to kill, or even hurt these new monsters. The villagers nstarted to panic, as every night at least 20 of these creatures would ninvide the village and kill anyone in their path, young or old.
The nvillagers then turned to the most wise person in the village, the old nlibrarian, and begged him for help. After days of reading through old ntomes, he eventually came across something that nmight be able to defeatn the evil menace that had came to be known as then traluk, but it came nnat a cost. Only the most noble of knights could wield the weapon, nwithout getting seduced by its power. Out of everybody within the nvillage, Zhook was chosen for this quest.
For weeks he traveled, seaching for the weapon he had named zaborig, but he could not find it.
Eventually,n he came upon a deserted cave system, with minecart tracks and a cart nlaid down carefully. Suspiciously, he jumped in and it started to move. nAfter what seemed like hours of twists and turns, he came to an opening,n and saw a flying being.
The flying being said "I am the allmighty nNotch, and i know why you have come Zhook. I bestow upon you the sword nof zaborig, and open up a quick way back to your village, as your peoplen are suffering beyond measure."
Once Zhook returned to his home nvillage, he ploughed the sword into the ground, releasing some of the nenergy of Notch, which turned the traluk mortal, turned their skin a npale green color, made them stand upright and made them blow up if they ntried to kill. These creatures came to be known as Creepers. But the npower of the sword proved to strong for Zhook, as it whispered into his nmind every night.
Eventually, his sanity gone, he ran around the ntown he had fought so hard to protect, slaughtering everything in his npath, and no-one could oppose his might. When the almighty Notch saw nwhat he had become, he cursed Zhook's appearance to reflect his now ntainted soul, and removed the sword of zaborig from existence. Zhook is nnow cursed to walk the land, unable to die, constantly thinking of what nhe has become and always in search for the fabled sword, to hear its nmaddening whispers one last time.