Screecher ~ With Background story! ~ For contest

Description from original post (created 2012-08-12 19:13):

This is my first skin, I call it the Screecher! It get's it's name from it's background story... and here it is:

It was a foggy night. A teenage boy had been out too late. It was midnight, the moon high in the sky, shrouded by ominous, dark clouds. He got in his convertible Mustang GT, but where were his keys? In his pocket? No. In the keyhole? No. Where were they. He got out. He walked back along the path. There they were! He picked them up, and just when he was about to turn around... A loud Screech sounded. It sounded like some unholy hybrid between a screech owl and a lizard. The teen looked into the forest, and saw red eyes staring at him. They didn't blink. His heart beat rapidly, and he breathed slowly. He took a step backwards. The eyes followed his foot. All the sudden he bolted head-over-heel! He heard the screech again. This time Ear bursting. He heard the claws of something scratching against the concrete as he ran. He knew it was faster than him. He leaped into his car, and jammed the keys into the keyhole. But the Creature jumped from 15 feet into the front seat of the Mustang. The drum-shattering squeal sounded from the creatures wide jaws. Slobber flew against the teens face. The sound of this screech was so loud it sent the Teen into a daze, and the last thing he saw was the bloodstained claws of the creature carrying his heart in it's hand...

Did you like it? I put a lot of thought into it! Tell me how you like the skin and the story and please diamond and subscribe!

BTW, The Screecher has camouflage-like skin because he has to blend into the environment to surprise it's prey.