Attea-The Underworld Army's Second General

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It was a dark, cloudy day in Skyworld. Palutena watched over Pit, General of the Underworld Army. Pit delivered a severe blow to the giant red mutation's face and it staggered backwards. A collective cheer sounded from the angels behind Palutena, who were watching as well. But then things began to take a turn for the worst. Pit was not focussing, and at that moment the crimson beast saw its chance. It swumg mighty fist above Pit's head. Pit turned and his eyes widened, but by the time he realised the giant hand speeding towards him, it was too late. Pit was smashed against the pristine white wall of the other-worldly palace, a  huge crack visible where he had crashed. Palutena and the angels gasped as the giant chuckled triumphantly, Pit's body falling out of the indent in the wall, falling towards the ground. The mutant smiled devilishly at Pit's limp figure lying weakly on the ground. The giant rose one huge foot and slammed it into Pit's body.
"Lady Palutena!" An angel said from behind a partition wall. "I'm not picking up any life signs! Could the general be..." He trailed off worried. Palutena turned to the distraught crowd. "Please," Palutena began shakily, tears streaking down her face. "Go back to your homes. We will have to elect a new general." Palutena finished, then she broke down. The crowd slowly filed out the doors much sad-sounding commotion audible. Soon no-one was left in the assembly hall except Palutena.
Or so she thought.
On the ground, sitting there, was a young, blonde female angel. She wore an outfit not unlike Pit's, with a green shoulder pad, wirstband and undershirt. She was sitting peacefully, her blonde fringe shielding her eyes. Palutena rose from her seat to leave when she saw the angel. "Attea." Palutena spoke the angel's name, and she rose to attention. "Lady Palutena." Attea responded. "What is it you wish me to do?" "Attea." Palutena spoke firmly. "Did you-do you-care for Pit?" Attea's eyes welled up with tears and her lips quivered. She clutched onto Palutena in a tight hug, supporting herself on the goddess. "Attea." Palutena said comfortingly. "You trained by him, didn't you?" Attea didn't speak. 
"Attea. I want you to be the new general."
Attea snapped her head back, looking questioningly into Palutena's eyes. "R-really?" Attea whimpered. "You heard me." Said Palutena. "I want you to be the new general of the Underworld Army." Attea wiped her tears away and stood straight.
"Okay." Attea said firmly. "For Pit!"
And from that day forward, the Underworld Army.

I hope you liked my story! NOTE: For anyone who didn't get the message, I don't own the Kid Icarus franchise, form whch Pit and Palutena orginate, but I do own my OC, Attea.